Critique: L. Boogie
SUPER ROUGH DRAFT.
This Lonnie Barker piece started off kind of lackluster. I didn't really know he was a gospel rapper until I researched him. So, admittedly, when I learned that I was kind of bummed. But I did find some fun stuff like he did a song with a friend of mine from St. Louis. Any who, I guess I should explain why I have a thing against faith stuff. I did a feature on faith last semester that was pretty tough to design. it was last minute, and it was just hard to really get into.
Now, to the inspiration. I can say I know hip-hop. Putting that in to visual form with a religious twist was kind of hard, at first. Hip-hop is supposed to be raw and unpredictable, but still it should be aesthetically pleasing. after mulling over possible illustrations I decided to go with a microphone wire/cable looking font. I thought this would be pretty easy to find. Was it? Nope! Back to Illustrator.
My first inspirations for the mic wire were a couple of artists' logos that I love.
That's Machine Gun Kelly and Wale's logos respectively. I love the idea of the shoelaces, but I needed something to send the hip-hop message across. As a I was looking for the Wale cover I glanced at this:
That's Wale. With a microphone cable wrapped around him. I was sold on the microphone cable. Now I just had to execute it. I figured I'd just find a font then lay an outer layer on it then just fill it in with a brush. Not that easy. That just flat out didn't work. So I googled microphone cable font and this is what I got.
It is a vector file so when I downloaded it, I got to see how it was made. As it turned out, there was no lazy/easy way around it. I just had to use the pen tool and draw out each letter for "Rockin With The Blessed."
That "Rockin With The Blessed" comes from a "Rockin With The Best" ad lib from Diddy or Puff Daddy whatever you want to call him. If Diddy's known for anything (besides being a filthy rich) it is ad libs. Diddy's pretty corny too, and I feel the first thought that comes to mind with gospel rappers is probably the corny factor.
Anyway, after my first design had a full page photo with the typography over it, Theresa said it was better to go with a one page photo. It was pretty tough to read so I definitely agreed. I went with the cross/studio picture to hit home the "Rockin' With the Blessed" idea.
The actually words were nothing of annoying and finicky. I have to tweak it so much with the white arrow and the add points pen tool. I decided that I didn't want a perfectly straight orientation for my letters. I wanted them to have a raw look to them, and look like they were strung up on a wall. Here's what I got.
As far as the feature layout, I needed this story to be chunked. It was way to long to just be one flowing narrative. It needed some design element to making it easier to swallow. That's still a work in progress. So I guess I'll leave this as to be continued.
Response: The Spring Preview pieces
I loved how everyone got super creative for the covers/splash pages/spreads. I've been getting a lot of support for my cover, and I have to say, all of you are motivating me. Krista's bee cover was so dope. I know I said I didn't want to do anything that was cliche, but Krista put her foot in that bee design. (That means she executed it extremely well). LeeAnn went totally left field with her cats and it worked. The same thing with Brittany's. The trippy look of hers doesn't scream spring, but it will definitely catch your eye walking past it. I thought Katie Wood's spread page was spot on for Vox. That's definitely a good thing though. Some might have went left field, but she showed a strong skill to have when design: discipline.
Overall, seeing everyone's design really pushed me for this Lonnie Barker feature. I thought about scrapping the cable letters, but after I read all the comments on my preview cover and hearing "I can't wait to see what you do next" a few times, I almost have to do the cable letters. Even now, I'm thinking about what I can add to that splash page to make it look better. So, to all, thank you!
Can't miss this: Logos In The Safe Zone
No, this is not a political post. I won't take it there. I promise. So,
Complex's Graphic Design section aggregated this material yesterday. Basically, the post calls out a bunch of logos that play it safe with wavy lines and red, white and blue. I've never been a fan of politically logos. Obama's was kind of cool. I mean this:
I think a bunch of them lack creativity. I understand the flag colors, but you can take chances in logo design. As a designer, if I saw a campaign logo that was creative and different, I would probably give him/her another look. I'm not saying I'd vote for him/her, but hey, you never know.
I hate safe. I know good designers have to have some discipline, but safe is a whole other subject. Besides Complex, you'll probably hear me blab about Kanye West a lot. I think i gave a mini rant about how awesome Kanye is in my first blog. Anyway, here we go. The thing I love about Kanye and his creative team is that there follow no rules. There is still some discipline though. You can see this in the way they pay homage to great works. His Coachella set last year was fa beyond any hip-hop stage I've ever seen. It was Kanye not giving a damn about what was hot then. Instead, he wanted to show the classic Greek style in a different light via hip-hop.
Maybe his ego makes him believe he's larger than these mammoth statues. Maybe, not. Either way, he pushes the culture forward.
These logos... Not so much.